How long
would the friend be my dearest friend? 1
The one
that speaks to me with what I think,
Just my own
wisdom to me he can lend,
And my
inconstant mind he writes in ink.
As an ally
him I would not preserve, 5
Two days
and two nights my patience would last,
Since for
new lore my mind I reserve,
I hear
myself plenty, hence he mist avast.
The
unheard, unknown I desire to see,
Seeking
novel shades in uncharted realms, 10
And not
learn from answers I can foresee,
But learn
from those great sights that overwhelm.
But I don’t
want to hear one of his words,
As my
mind’ll see, what in my mind is blurred.
good vocab! I really like that you used a poem, great job!
ReplyDeletei like how deep this is, and how you planned this out carefully. Most people, me included, did the normal essay but i like how you took it one step forward and did a poem
ReplyDeletethis is such an awesome idea. it's so original, i would've never thought to do something like this. :)
ReplyDeleteSince it was assigned as an in class writing I have never thought about writing a poem! I think this poem was awesome. It shows the author's thoughts.
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