Taylor Greene
Mrs. Boyle
Honors Lit&Comp 2
Canterbury Tales Story
11-16-11
"She's
blinking!" My eyes twitch, a
fluorescent light shines in my eyes, making it hard to see clearly. My chair
gets tilted up, and I see a few faces, some familiar and some unknown.
Obviously my parents are here, but why? My teammates are here, as well as my
coach. He's pacing around the room, mumbling to himself. It's weird; he only
does that when he's nervous, but again, why? A referee is here too. I do not
believe that I have ever met her before. All I want to know is why are all of
these people here? Wait a minute…
"Where
am I?" I ask. Nobody responds for a second. I look at the setting of the
room. There is a curtain; the curtain divides the room in two. There's a
television, a table, a bunch of little and big machines all around the room,
but when I turn my head and see a table filled with flowers, chocolates and get
well soon posters, I finally hit me. I am in the hospital. I see a woman in a
white doctor's jacket. I'm assuming she is my doctor.
"Doc, what did I do?" I ask
"Lizzy i you're not going to like this news, I think it
is best if you here all of this from your parents" says the doctor. Now I
am worried. Usually doctors just straight up tell you what is going on but this
time is different. The doctor motioned for my parents to step closer, while at
the same time she shushed everyone else standing in the background.
"Hey Sweetie, how are you feeling?" Dad asks as he
grabs my hand, "you've been out for a couple of hours" Mom just sits
there stroking my hair smiling with a look of relief. It is easy to see by the
look in her eyes when she is looking at me.
"What happened?" Alright, I'll admit I am a little
freaked out right now, but I am ready to take it.
"Alright Liz, here is what happened…..
***
November
17, 2011. An important day for many, but this day is the most important for
Senior Captain Lizzy Malone. Today is probably the most important day of her
life. Her last time wearing that green and black jersey, her last time ever
wearing the number four, her last ever high school soccer game. This is not
just any game; this is the championship game, the division one conference
finals.
This game
is equally important for her other teammates. Take Brittany Morris for example.
Junior goalie and a very good one to be exact. One of the best in the country,
a scout from Stanford, the college of her dreams is coming to this game. She
knows she cannot screw up, she is ready for this game just as much as and good
friend, Lizzy.
A Wilson
bus pulls up in front of their locker room. As the team loads their bus, they
look through the windows and see all of their friends piling into regular
yellow school buses, their faces painted green and black, the football guys painted
their chests too. Also there were fans in green bodysuits already getting their
peers hyped up about the game. They were ready to see the team do what they do
best.
The buses,
both the teams and the fans get rolling. The game is played at a neutral gym
because in a finals game, there is no home team advantage. Now for girl's high
school soccer, this was going to be a game for the books. Lizzy and Heather's
team the Culver Cougars, versus the Bedford Bandits. Both teams are undefeated,
both teams are equally as talented and matched. The only statistic that makes
the Bandits in first place and the Cougars in second is the amount of goals
scored on their opponents. The Bandits have scored one more goal than the
Cougars.
Coach
Ginwell does a roll call. Everyone is all checked in and accounted for. Coach
is new this year; new to the school, new to the country. He is here on a visa
from the United Kingdom, and like most young men in their 20's from the United
Kingdom come to coach soccer here in the States. He is an unbelievable coach.
He studies the way his players personalities correspond into their soccer
playing and he uses that to his and their advantage. He knows how to act
appropriately at games, unless one of his players is majorly slacking off during
the game, then he will get a little mad, but he never holds a grudge. Just
overall he is a good coach.
Meanwhile,
Tess Jones, a sophomore that goes to a private high school far away, happens to
be refereeing this game. Unlike the rest of the town, is nervous for the game.
She is only an assistant referee, but she still has a lot of responsibility
with this game. She hates reffing, she honestly does it for the pay because it
helps her help her parents by contributing a little to her tuition at school.
Her mom is driving her, and they got stuck behind the buses.
Both teams
and Tess arrive at the game. The mood is set as Lizzy leads her team onto the
astro-turf field, as Tess goes to her fellow referee's. The teams start their
pre-game. The warm-up lap first, then onto trapping, dribbling and passing.
After that there are small scrimmages. Finally, the last warm up drills they do
are shooting and crossing. After that they have their pregame talk.
"ladies,"
Coach Ginwell says, "For some of you, it is your last game playing soccer,
for some, it is your last time playing high school soccer, and for you
underclassmen, this may be the first of many finals to come for you. Don't let
being here get to you, don't let them get to you. They are good, but the thing
is, is that you believe you can do this. Yes, they have beaten us in a
scrimmage before, they think they have this game in the bag, but you guys have
a job to do. Your job is more than winning; your job is proving to everyone
that you deserve to wear those metals, your job is to prove to them that we can
bounce back, and lastly, your job is to prove to yourself that you can do this.
We came here on a mission, so go out and complete it" The girls knew that
this is go-time, and unlike any game they have ever played before, they are for
this game.
"Ok
Tess, you know what to do. Watch for offsides, and on throw-ins I'll watch the
hands, you watch the feet. I can tell your nervous but you'll be alright,"
the center ref, a more experienced referee said. He could tell that Tess was
nervous, she was very timid and quiet. Tess nodded and walked on to the coaches
side of the field. She was happy that she did not get the fan's side because
she could tell that they were going to be rowdy.
The ref's
shook hands and the checked to see if the goalies were ready. Heather checked
the stands. She could see the Stanford scout, and a wave of excitement moved
all around her body. She, along with the rest of the team were ready for this.
The center ref blew the whistle. The game has started.
The first
half started and is underway. The teams look extremely evenly matched. Whenever
the Bandits got a shot off, Heather always saved the shot, and came up with the
ball; she was having one of her best games yet, and so was Lizzy. Lizzy, the
star striker, committed to Boston College, was taking shots left and right, but
her biggest threat interfering between her and her goal was the Bandit's
goalie. She was good, real good. She was playing just as good as Heather. Though going through Lizzy's mind, she knows
she can crack the defense, but she just needs to find the goalie's weak spot.
Tweet!
Tweet! Halftime, the score, nil, nil. Both teams are playing so spectacular
that even the refs, including Tess were enjoying watching the game. Both teams
give their halftime talks and they are anxious to get back on the field and
bring back a victory to their schools. The second half starts.
Both teams
come out hard, yet each team still cannot find the back of the net. Then 20, minutes into the second half, Lizzy gets
the perfect breakaway. She is running, gun's blazing to the goal. She tuned out
everything, she cannot hear her teammates, her coach, fans, nothing. She is in
her own little world. As she gets into the other teams 18 yard box, the
unthinkable happens. Blindsided Lizzy gets slide tackled in the box, and
everything goes black.
***
"and
now we ended up here at the hospital, waiting for the results on your
injuries," Dad finishes. I do not know what to say. It's a lot to process.
I look down at my body. I see my right leg covered in bandages and medical
gauze. I stay speechless for a couple of minutes. I do not know what to say. I
look up at my parents, they understand that I just need some time to process
all of this. Heather and some girl, I think she was one of the referees or
something walks in the door.
"So…?"
I ask. I want to know what happened.
"Well
funny turn of events actually, after you got demolished in the box, you were
shooting and when the girl got you, you shot the ball, and it bounced off the
other goalies head and went in the goal. Liz you scored the winning goal! We are
the state champions, and also Stanford loved me!" Heather started jumping
up and down. She does this when she gets excited.
The biggest
smile went on my face. I scored the winning goal! I can't believe it! That ref
that came in with Tess started to speak. "Hi, I'm Tess I reffed your game,
and I wanted to present this MVP trophy to you personally. You really deserved
it, you literally look one for your team and I again congratulate you for this
win, but I have to go, my mom is waiting in the car. I just wanted to make sure
that you were alright".
"That's
so sweet of you Tess! I couldn't thank you enough for the great job you did
today too, and it was very nice to meet you, hope to see you sometime in the
future!" Tess smiled and nodded and left the hospital, and hopped back in
the car with her mom.
I stare at
this beautiful piece of metal, resting between my palms. This trophy symbolizes
a dream come true. I have been dreaming to hold this trophy ever since I was a
little girl. Now that I have it, I am going to cherish it and love it and know
that in the end of the day, even though I am sitting in a hospital all wrapped
up in bandages and gauze, that I worked for something so hard, and the work
payed off, and at the end of the day, I made my own, and I do not regret one
bit of it.
you clearly know what you're talking about, and it translates. i thought it was pretty well written as well.
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